Although I wanted this to be my final copy, I have noticed various other factors of the picture which need fixing:
- There is a white star over "YOU" in the bottom cover line, from when I was experimenting with the paintbrush star tool. As this was the same colour as the background, I did not notice that this was still there until I placed black text under it.
- Sophie's skin looks a bit odd, between her hair and ear. This is what it was like on the original photo but I still need to fix it, as it does not look professional.
- There is a small triangle of white in Sophie's hair which I must get rid of
- I am going to try putting the cover lines at the bottom on a black background rather than white, to represent contrast.
4 comments:
Front page looks really good! The colors work really well, the different types of font work really well as well, the picture suits the front page i think, plus i like the title and the font of the title! Overall really good! :D
Nice one claire! looks really good, loving the colours and how you've separated the cover lines, and how you've used a few different fonts to mix it up a bit :)
Only thing I would say is that you could put a cover line on the right hand side as they all all on the left.
But still really good!
I love her gaze into the camera, basically seducing the reader. I enjoy how the black font is used in conjunction with the pink font for coverlines. Interesting range of fonts also. Really well thought out and I like how white is the base colour as it makes everything else so noticeable. Beautiful magazine cover.
Lav this.
Nice one Claire.
You managed to sort it all in the end, it really works well.
Only thing you could do, is to arrange cover lines slightly differently.
Otherwise Brill.
Well doen media buddy.
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